Editing Techniques

Second Draft Trailer Tweaks

Although we were initially happy with the final draft of our trailer, we were able to find areas of improvement which would make our trailer even better.

These were some of the minor tweaks that we had to make:

First Draft Trailer Tweaks

We received constructive criticism of our first draft which enabled us to gain another perspective on our trailer. From this feedback we were able to make significant improvements to our trailer.
These were some of the suggestions we had:

Test Audience Feedback

We were able to obtain feedback from at least 30 students who were all in our age demographic and receive feedback sheets from them. This was especially helpful in reviewing our trailer and what improvements could be made in it.

These were some of the most helpful and instructive feedback sheets:

Key points of improvement:

-narrative/plot was revealed to the audience which gave them no incentive to want to see it in the cinema

-eyeliner scene was presented to be much more significant than it actually was when combined with the headlights scene
-sound overlapped in some parts of the trailer, specifically the phases

Feedback/Improvement Notes

Initial improvements

Initial Feedback

Class Feedback