We were able to obtain feedback from at least 30 students who were all in our age demographic and receive feedback sheets from them. This was especially helpful in reviewing our trailer and what improvements could be made in it.
These were some of the most helpful and instructive feedback sheets:


Key points of improvement:
-narrative/plot was revealed to the audience which gave them no incentive to want to see it in the cinema
-eyeliner scene was presented to be much more significant than it actually was when combined with the headlights scene
-sound overlapped in some parts of the trailer, specifically the phases
-sound overlapped in some parts of the trailer, specifically the phases


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